News plays an important part of most people’s lives. Why is news so important to people? Why is so much news dedicated to bad news? Should the news focus on good news instead?
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that your essay has a clear logical structure by organizing it into paragraphs with clear topic sentences that introduce the focus of each paragraph. Each paragraph should develop a single main idea related to the overall topic.
Coherence and Cohesion
Include an introduction and conclusion that clearly state your perspective on the topic and summarize the main points discussed in the essay, respectively. Both elements are present in your essay, but they could be more explicitly tied to the key questions.
Coherence and Cohesion
Support the main points with specific examples or explanations to strengthen your argument and make your essay more persuasive. You have provided some general statements, but more detailed examples would help to illustrate your points more convincingly.
Task Achievement
Make sure to fully address all parts of the task in a balanced way. Present clear and comprehensive ideas that directly respond to each question posed in the prompt. You have addressed the importance of news and the prevalence of bad news, but could further elaborate on whether the news should focus on good news instead.
Task Achievement
Always conclude with a strong statement that encapsulates your viewpoint on the topic, making your stance clear to the reader. While your conclusion is present, it could further highlight the nuances of the discussion by reflecting on the contrast between 'bad' and 'good' news.
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
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- to give a clear example
- such as
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