You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it.
Dear Jack,
I am writing to you about my decision about how I want to work in London which is the company’s
head
office
in
for six months.
As you know, I Change preposition
apply
am
working in Wrong verb form
have been
Istanbul
Correct article usage
the Istanbul
office
for five years, I have some problems with my family and I hope to leave my country, should I transfer to head
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the head
office
I have enough time to take a professional training course in London university
and it can have a positive effect on my efficiency.
So I request you to kindly permit me to leave the country. If Capitalize word
University
it
possible for you Add a verb
it is
it was
tell
me Verb problem
let
to
know about how can I request to transfer to Fix the infinitive
apply
head
office
or tell me about temporary
occupation vacancy at the Correct article usage
the temporary
head
office
.
I should inform you, I
can handle my work in Istanbul with my laptop and Katy Correct word choice
that I
accept
to Verb problem
has agreed
helps
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help
my
work for six months.
Thank you for your time and support, I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
John SmithChange preposition
with my
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Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear and distinct idea, adhering closely to the prompt.
coherence cohesion
Use connective words and transitions effectively to guide the reader through your ideas cohesively.
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Address all parts of the prompt thoroughly to provide a fully developed response.
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Maintain a formal and professional tone throughout the letter to align with the context of writing to a manager.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite