The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph provides information on the amount of reading done by males and females in the Burnaby Public Library between 2011 and 2014.
Overall
, there is an increment in
men
over the period
while
there is a decrement in
women
after a certain point. At first glance,
men
have read about 3000 books
while
women
have read about 5000 books in 2011. There was a slight increment of publications read by both males and females until 2013 which has an interception point of 10000 publications. It has been witnessed that the number of
women
has drastically dropped from 2013 to 2014.
Furthermore
, the apex of the
men
has been touched at 14000 in 2014 which is almost one-half of the volume of
women
at the time. There are infallible testimonies to claim that the volume of
men
has surged from 2012 to 2013 by 6000
while
the primex of
women
has been touched in 2013.
Moreover
, the statistics show that the growth was significantly linear for both genders until 2013 arriving at 10000 literature.
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