The map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the side.

The map below show an  industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the side.
The maps illustrate an industrial
area
on the east side of Norbiton town and a redevelopment plan.
Overall
, the goal is to convert the factory into a residential
area
with additional housing and facility support. Currently, the industrial
area
is to the east of the town, which has a
river
to the north. There is a roundabout in the
center
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of the
area
surrounding the faculty along the
road
that is
to be removed in the future. The
area
around the eastern
road
is to be housing, a school
at the end
, and a playground to the north. Another
road
will be added from the roundabout and over a
river
to the farmland, with housing along Western
Road
. The farmland north of the
river
is planned to be used for additional housing and another
road
parallel to the
river
. There is
also
a plan to add a
road
to the northwest side of the roundabout. More housing is to be built along one side of the
road
and
at the end
of the
road
. To the southwest of the roundabout, shops are planned to be constructed. Across the street to the southeast, there is to be a medical
center
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. A second roundabout is
also
added, where the south roads currently meet the main
road
at the T-intersection
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