The map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the side.
The maps illustrate an industrial
area
on the east side of Norbiton town and a redevelopment plan.
Overall
, the goal is to convert the factory into a residential area
with additional housing and facility support.
Currently, the industrial area
is to the east of the town, which has a river
to the north. There is a roundabout in the center
of the Change the spelling
centre
area
surrounding the faculty along the road
that is
to be removed in the future.
The area
around the eastern road
is to be housing, a school at the end
, and a playground to the north. Another road
will be added from the roundabout and over a river
to the farmland, with housing along Western Road
. The farmland north of the river
is planned to be used for additional housing and another road
parallel to the river
. There is also
a plan to add a road
to the northwest side of the roundabout. More housing is to be built along one side of the road
and at the end
of the road
.
To the southwest of the roundabout, shops are planned to be constructed. Across the street to the southeast, there is to be a medical center
. A second roundabout is Change the spelling
centre
also
added, where the south roads currently meet the main road
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