The map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the side.

The map below show an  industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the side.
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The maps illustrate an industrial
area
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on the east side of Norbiton town and a redevelopment plan.
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, the goal is to convert the factory into a residential
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with additional housing and facility support. Currently, the industrial
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is to the east of the town, which has a
river
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to the north. There is a roundabout in the
center
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of the
area
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surrounding the faculty along the
road
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that is
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to be removed in the future. The
area
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around the eastern
road
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is to be housing, a school
at the end
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, and a playground to the north. Another
road
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will be added from the roundabout and over a
river
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to the farmland, with housing along Western
Road
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. The farmland north of the
river
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is planned to be used for additional housing and another
road
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parallel to the
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. There is
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a plan to add a
road
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to the northwest side of the roundabout. More housing is to be built along one side of the
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and
at the end
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of the
road
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. To the southwest of the roundabout, shops are planned to be constructed. Across the street to the southeast, there is to be a medical
center
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. A second roundabout is
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added, where the south roads currently meet the main
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at the T-intersection
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