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The chart below shows the total number of minutes(in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002

The chart below shows the total number of minutes(in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002
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The bar chart compares the
overall
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minutes
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 of telephone calls in the UK which were classified into three groups that were named local, National and international, and mobiles between 1195 and 2002. It can be seen that during 8
years
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 people tended to communicate through local lines. The usage of mobile dramatically increased but it remained
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 the lowest level in comparison with other groups. In 1995 individuals' calls by local fixed-line was just more than 70
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minutes
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 which saw its peak at 90
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minutes
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 in 1999 and
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 it decreased to its first figures in 1995 over 4
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.
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, it maintained its status as the major call type.
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, the proportion of time spoken at about 38
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minutes
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 nationally and internationally in 1995 increased to a little under 50
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minutes
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 after 3
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 and it remained steady at around 48
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minutes
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 for a year and after that, it began to go up. The quantity of time for users of mobiles was recorded at a minor rate approximately 3
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minutes
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 and it went up to 45
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minutes
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 noticeably over 8
years
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words minutes, years, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "go up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • total number
  • minutes
  • telephone calls
  • UK
  • divided into
  • categories
  • from
  • to
  • overall
  • increased significantly
  • local fixed-line calls
  • accounted for
  • largest proportion
  • throughout
  • period
  • international calls
  • highest rate of growth
  • experiencing
  • sharp increase
  • national long-distance calls
  • remained relatively stable
  • slight decline
  • towards
  • end
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