the charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. summarize the information and make a comparison. write at least 150 words.
The pie charts illustrate the percentages of three
ingridients
in different meals, which Correct your spelling
ingredients
considered
harmful if consumed in great Add a missing verb
are considered
quantity
in a certain country.
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quantities
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
dinner contains more nutrients than any other Linking Words
meals
. Fix the agreement mistake
meal
Besides
, Linking Words
breakfast
allocates the minimum Use synonyms
ingridient
.
With regard to Correct your spelling
ingredient
ingredients
Sodium
, it can be noticed that dinner reached the peak by 43% followed by lunch, containing 29% and Use synonyms
breakfast
and snacks were the least meals in terms of including Use synonyms
Sodium
with approximately 14%. Now, by taking a look at saturated fat, it can be clarified that lunch dedicates more than Use synonyms
one-forth
of the total proportion. Correct your spelling
one-fourth
Then
, snacks with a percentage of 21%, which is a bit more Linking Words
comparing
with Wrong verb form
compared
Sodium
and Use synonyms
breakfast
with a mere 16%, Use synonyms
contan
the second proportion.
Interestingly, snacks dedicate more than one-fifth of the added sugar factor (42%), which is the prevailing meal Correct your spelling
contain
contains
in contrast
to Linking Words
sodium
. Dinner has 23% of added sugar and Use synonyms
Breakfast
is the least meal in terms of it with roughly 16%.Use synonyms
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