the charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. summarize the information and make a comparison. write at least 150 words.

the charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

summarize the information and make a comparison.

write at least 150 words.
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The pie charts illustrate the percentages of three
ingridients
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ingredients
in different meals, which
considered
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are considered
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harmful if consumed in great
quantity
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quantities
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in a certain country.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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dinner contains more nutrients than any other
meals
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meal
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.
Besides
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,
breakfast
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allocates the minimum
ingridient
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ingredient
ingredients
. With regard to
Sodium
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, it can be noticed that dinner reached the peak by 43% followed by lunch, containing 29% and
breakfast
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and snacks were the least meals in terms of including
Sodium
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with approximately 14%. Now, by taking a look at saturated fat, it can be clarified that lunch dedicates more than
one-forth
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of the total proportion.
Then
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, snacks with a percentage of 21%, which is a bit more
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with
Sodium
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and
breakfast
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with a mere 16%,
contan
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contain
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the second proportion. Interestingly, snacks dedicate more than one-fifth of the added sugar factor (42%), which is the prevailing meal
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to
sodium
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. Dinner has 23% of added sugar and
Breakfast
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is the least meal in terms of it with roughly 16%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words breakfast, sodium with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentages" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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