The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years.

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The supplied charts compare the proportion of different types of energy produced in France in two years, 1995 and 2005.

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, as can be seen, gas and coal were the most significant by far in

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increased in dominance, whilst remaining the top in production in the succeeding year. The three kinds that held the majority in 1995 were coal, petrol, and gas, which were 29.80%, 29.27%, and 29.63%, respectively. Whilst coal and gas increased their percentage to 30.93% and 30.31%, petrol saw a decrease to 19.55% in 2005.

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, all three categories obtained the highest position in the production of energy in

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periods. The remaining two had around a tenth of the total in 1995 each, but

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rose by around 5% in 2005. Of the smallest percentage, other sources moderately rose from 4.90% to 9.10%. Nuclear energy went from 6.40% to 10.10% in 2005.

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The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years.

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