The diagram below shows the recycling process of plastics.The diagram below shows the recycling process of plastics.
The diagram
illustrate
about recycling Change the verb form
illustrates
process
of plastics
items. Change the noun form
plastic
Overall
, after their use, smaller plastic
items and bags are thrown away in landfills, while
plastic
bottles are recycled. The following paragraphs detail the recycling process
for collected plastic
waste. There are various ways in the process
of recycling plastics
waste.
In the beginning, the packages are made in the shop, Change the noun form
plastic
after
that Correct word choice
and after
buy
and used by people Wrong verb form
bought
Add a missing verb
are devided
devided
into two parts. Correct your spelling
divided
Following
this
, sorted by color
, shape and size, Change the spelling
colour
then
stored in warehouses and wait for creation in the next process
then
some are thrown into landfills.
The plastic
waste that has been sorted is then
transported by truck and goes to the processing stage. After arriving at the factory, the plastics are processed and being
heated until the Unnecessary verb
apply
plastic
melts. After that, going through all the processes, it becomes a new product and is marketed to companies or customers.Submitted by musa.nuwa on
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