The diagram below shows the recycling process of plastics.The diagram below shows the recycling process of plastics.

The diagram below shows the recycling process of plastics.The diagram below shows the recycling process of plastics.
The diagram
illustrate
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illustrates
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about recycling
process
of
plastics
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plastic
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items.
Overall
, after their use, smaller
plastic
items and bags are thrown away in landfills,
while
plastic
bottles are recycled. The following paragraphs detail the recycling
process
for collected
plastic
waste. There are various ways in the
process
of recycling
plastics
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waste. In the beginning, the packages are made in the shop,
after
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and after
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that
buy
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bought
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and used by people
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are devided
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devided
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divided
into two parts.
Following
this
, sorted by
color
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, shape and size,
then
stored in warehouses and wait for creation in the next
process
then
some are thrown into landfills. The
plastic
waste that has been sorted is
then
transported by truck and goes to the processing stage. After arriving at the factory, the plastics are processed and
being
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heated until the
plastic
melts. After that, going through all the processes, it becomes a new product and is marketed to companies or customers.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, plastic with synonyms.
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