The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
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The line graph illustrates the amount of goods carried in the UK from 1974 to 2002 by four different means
to
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transport
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.
Overall
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,road transit was the most used mode of transportation
while
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the pipeline was the least.
This
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happened between 28 years.
To begin
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with, water and Rail
transports
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transport
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were at the same level from 1974 to 1978.After that,in 1982 water transportation will
increased
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by 2 times. Stood still for 12 years, but fell in 1942 and rose in 2002.The rails immediately tripled,
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,in 2002 again increased by 40
million
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.
Moreover
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,the most used way of
transport
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was by road with road freight shipments increasing significantly from about 65
million
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in 1974 to just 90
million
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in 2002. Only a few shipments were made using pipelines in 1974 with only 5
million
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tons of goods transported in the UK compared to land
transport
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which carried 70
million
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tons the same year.
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despite the fact that pipeline
transport
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carries less cargo. Every year it doubled in size. Reached 22
million
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tons in 2002
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words transport, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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