The diagrams below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.
The maps below show the changes in a public
park
when it was first opened in the year 1920 as well as
the same park
today.
Overall
, it is clearly seen that a number of facilities has
been added to the infrastructure of Garange Change the verb form
have
Park
on Arnold Avenue such
as a children's play area, an amphitheatre for concerts and other.
According to
the given diagram, in 1920, there was a fountain in the centre of a community park
, while
in the coming days rose garden will take the place of a fountain along with
the service of seats. Moreover
, the entrance will run from
the same direction. Change preposition
in
Furthermore
, in the corner of the North side, there was a pond for water plants which will shift into the facility of a playground for children. Also
, a cafe will be opened in the community park
.
Moving further
, the stage for musicians should be replaced with an amphitheatre for concerts. Meanwhile, a water feature will be constructed in the area of the glasshouse in the coming days.Submitted by svmaibcamaibs on
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