The diagram shows the relationship between a numbers of different languages. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the relationship between some distinct languages of the
English
language
family. Overall
, the languages are divided into different groups
based on their locations with the British language
as the larger group.
First of all, the English
language
splits into two
different branches - the American English
branch and the British English
branch.
After that, the American English
language
continues
to Wrong verb form
continued
divide
into Wrong verb form
be divided
two
major groups
, located in two
countries of North America. The United States of America then
consists of six individual groups
while
Canada has two
groups
.
In contrast
, the British English
branch consists of six different groups
, three times larger than the American English
. The number of these groups
’ members range
between Correct subject-verb agreement
ranges
two
to five with Australasia, West Indies, and Far East as the groups
with the least number of members while
that of Indian-Pakistan is the biggest.Submitted by tieuvuphuonghoa on
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