The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.
The line graph illustrates how many
books
were read by men
and women at Burnaby Public Library between 2011 and 2014. Overall
, although
women read more books
than men
in the beginning period
, they dropped significantly at the end
of the period
.
To begin
with, there were around five thousand
books
read by women in 2011. The number
of books
rose gradually in the next two years and peaked at ten thousand
books
in 2013, before falling by two thousand
.
Meanwhile, in terms of men
, the number
of books
read by men
was only three thousand
in the beginning period
given. The number
grew steadily to four thousand
books
in 2012 before soaring in the next three years. The number
of books
among both sexes marked the same number
in 2013 with ten thousand
. At the end
of the period
given, the male
surpassed the Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
in relation to the Fix the agreement mistake
females
number
of books
that they read at Burnaby Public Library.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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