The diagrams below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

The diagrams below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.
The first map depicts
the
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Grange
Park
when it opened in 1920, The second one shows how it appears today.
Overall
, the
park
changed drastically over the years and
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parts remain unchanged like the two entrances and one of the rose gardens. The seats that in 1920 were spread around the
park
are nowadays placed around the new rose garden, which is at the
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of the map,
instead
of the fountain that was there in 1920. The second rose garden has not been replaced so today we can still find it at the top left of the map, but in front of
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a new Amphitheatre for concerts was built. Looking at the right side of the two maps, we can notice how today the third Rose garden has been replaced with a Café and next to it we can now find a play area for children. The Glasshouse and the pond for water plants have been replaced with a water feature. Next to it, it is now possible to find the entrance
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the underground car
park
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • transformation
  • developments
  • modifications
  • landscaping
  • recreational needs
  • enhance
  • functionality
  • vegetation
  • environmental conservation
  • infrastructure improvements
  • community involvement
  • diverse groups
  • outdoor activities
  • environmental stewardship
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