Some think newspapers are the best method for reading the news while others think other media is better. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
I
believed
that online Wrong verb form
believe
media
is the easiest way to know the news
around the world within a few minutes. Even, we do not want to wait for a long time to know the news
. Although
, in the ,past Correct word choice
However
the
people Correct article usage
apply
do
not have much influence on social Wrong verb form
did
media
, so they must rely
on newspapers to know the Wrong verb form
relied
news
. Some elder people tell
that it is essential to read the Verb problem
say
newspaper
. In the following paragraphs, I will describe some of my opinions as reading the news
in the newspaper
and through online media
have
both advantages and disadvantages.
Correct subject-verb agreement
has
For instance
, One of my school teachers suggested me
read the Correct pronoun usage
I
newspaper
daily in the morning. Because I am not good at the language, in order to improve my fluency, she asked me to read. Another advantage is there in the newspaper
is, the
Correct word choice
that the
news
is ordered in the proper manner. And it is easy to read. Also
, someone likes to read the sports page, so they can directly go to the page and read. At the side of the paper, some of the contexts and contents are written, which gives some information to the reader. So many benefits are there by reading the newspaper
. But these advantages cannot be seen in the online media
. Reading the news
in online media
continuously, can lead to bored and irritate the reader to read.
Even though, If we want to know the news
around the universe, then
the best option is online media
. We should not need to wait for the next day to know the news
. But it doesn't give good refreshments to us by reading online. Also
, we need the internet to read such
articles or news
on social media
. Another disadvantage is, to buy the data we need to spend a lot of money.
In conclusion, Nowadays, technology is developing more and more, so most of the youngest people prefer to read the news
in
online because of less spare time. But it depends on the individual interest.Change preposition
apply
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task achievement
Ensure that the essay addresses all parts of the task promptly. Sometimes the response seems general and not fully focused on the question. You should aim to express and justify your opinions with relevant, extended and supported ideas.
coherence cohesion
Work to provide a clear position throughout the response. Make sure that the essay structure is logical and clear, using paragraphs effectively to separate ideas and arguments. Try to link your ideas with cohesive devices but be cautious not to overuse them.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite