Some think newspapers are the best method for reading the news while others think other media is better. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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believed
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that online
media
is the easiest way to know the
news
around the world within a few minutes. Even, we do not want to wait for a long time to know the
news
.
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the
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people
do
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not have much influence on social
media
, so they
must rely
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on newspapers to know the
news
. Some elder people
tell
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say
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that it is essential to read the
newspaper
. In the following paragraphs, I will describe some of my opinions as reading the
news
in the
newspaper
and through online
media
have
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both advantages and disadvantages.
For instance
, One of my school teachers suggested
me
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read the
newspaper
daily in the morning. Because I am not good at the language, in order to improve my fluency, she asked me to read. Another advantage is there in the
newspaper
is,
the
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that the
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news
is ordered in the proper manner. And it is easy to read.
Also
, someone likes to read the sports page, so they can directly go to the page and read. At the side of the paper, some of the contexts and contents are written, which gives some information to the reader. So many benefits are there by reading the
newspaper
. But these advantages cannot be seen in the online
media
. Reading the
news
in online
media
continuously, can lead to bored and irritate the reader to read. Even though, If we want to know the
news
around the universe,
then
the best option is online
media
. We should not need to wait for the next day to know the
news
. But it doesn't give good refreshments to us by reading online.
Also
, we need the internet to read
such
articles or
news
on social
media
. Another disadvantage is, to buy the data we need to spend a lot of money. In conclusion, Nowadays, technology is developing more and more, so most of the youngest people prefer to read the
news
in
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online because of less spare time. But it depends on the individual interest.
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Ensure that the essay addresses all parts of the task promptly. Sometimes the response seems general and not fully focused on the question. You should aim to express and justify your opinions with relevant, extended and supported ideas.
coherence cohesion
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Credibility
  • Editorial oversight
  • Investigative journalism
  • Digital divide
  • News cycle
  • Sensationalism
  • Media literacy
  • Filter bubble
  • Echo chamber
  • Citizen journalism
  • Paywall
  • Fake news
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