The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart demonstrates the distribution of families' weekly
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type
of areas in 1968 and in 2018. The data is in proportion.
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types
Overall
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the dominating expenditure was food in 1968, it changed to the leisure Linking Words
category
in 2018. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the least spending was on Linking Words
fuel
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power
in 1968 and personal goods Use synonyms
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fuel
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power
in 2018.
In detail, the greatest spending was on the food Use synonyms
category
in 1968 with 40% and it is followed by the categories of housing, clothing and footwear both having 10%. The least consumption belongs to the Use synonyms
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fuel
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power
with nearly 6%. The food Use synonyms
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is the only Use synonyms
category
which showed a markable decrease of nearly 17% in 2018.
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Moreover
, in 2018, the greatest expenditure was leisure Linking Words
category
with nearly 23% and Use synonyms
then
followed by housing and transport with nearly 19% and 14%, respectively. The least expenditure was Linking Words
fuel
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power
and personal goods with the same proportion which is nearly 4%. Use synonyms
Lastly
, the only Linking Words
category
that remained steady was household goods. The share of spending did not change between the two years.Use synonyms
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