The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart demonstrates the distribution of families' weekly
budget
in Fix the agreement mistake
budgets
a
different Correct article usage
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type
of areas in 1968 and in 2018. The data is in proportion.
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types
Overall
, while
the dominating expenditure was food in 1968, it changed to the leisure category
in 2018. Additionally
, the least spending was on fuel
and power
in 1968 and personal goods in addition
to the fuel
and power
in 2018.
In detail, the greatest spending was on the food category
in 1968 with 40% and it is followed by the categories of housing, clothing and footwear both having 10%. The least consumption belongs to the category
of fuel
and power
with nearly 6%. The food category
is the only category
which showed a markable decrease of nearly 17% in 2018.
Moreover
, in 2018, the greatest expenditure was leisure category
with nearly 23% and then
followed by housing and transport with nearly 19% and 14%, respectively. The least expenditure was fuel
and power
and personal goods with the same proportion which is nearly 4%. Lastly
, the only category
that remained steady was household goods. The share of spending did not change between the two years.Submitted by asik.melliss on
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