The line graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007.

The line graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007.
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The line graph illustrates the amount of three kinds of spreads (
margarine
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, low-fat and reduced spreads, and
butter
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) between 1981 and 2007. Units are measured in
grams
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.
Overall
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, the consumption of
margarine
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and
butter
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decreased over the period given; for low-fat and reduced spreads, it rose. At the start of the period,
butter
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was the most popular spread.
Then
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it was replaced by
margarine
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from 1991 to 2001. Following that, low-fat and reduced spreads became the most widely used in the final
years
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. In 1981, the
butter
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began at around 140
grams
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and
then
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reached a peak at around 160
grams
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in 1986, before falling dramatically to approximately 50
grams
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in the
last
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few
years
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.
Likewise
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, around 90
grams
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of
margarine
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were eaten in the first year after which the figure fluctuated slightly and dropped to a low of 40
grams
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in 2007.
On the other hand
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, the consumption of low-fat and reduced spreads was only stated in 1996 at around 10
grams
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.
This
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figure, which reached a high of roughly over 80
grams
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over the next five
years
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, fell slightly in the final
years
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to approximately 70
grams
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in 2007. (192 words)
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Vocabulary: Replace the words margarine, butter, grams, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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