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The diagrams below show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the two diagrams
represents
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 the detailed explanation of how electricity
if
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is
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 generated from the
wave
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 power. The structure
consist
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 of a
turbine
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 connected to the chamber which is located on the cliff or a sea wall. the electricity is obtained by the
air
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 which is created by the movement of waves. In the first diagram, The notable part is the
air
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 movement. here when the
wave
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 hits the chamber it
exert
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air
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 into
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turbine
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the turbine
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.
Then
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 the
turbine
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roatates
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rotates
on
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clock-wise
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a clock-wise
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 direction and releases the
air
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 through
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column
cloumn
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a cloumn
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.
power
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Power
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 is obtained through the rotational movement of a
turbine
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 In the second picture, When the
wave
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 flows
backward
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then
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 the
turbine
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 rotates
on
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the anti
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anti
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anti-clock-wise
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clock-wise
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 direction. So, simentensly whenever a
wave
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 flows through and
flow
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flows
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 backwards the
turbine
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 moves in
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clock-wise
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clockwise
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 and in
anti
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anti-clock-wise
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clock-wise
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 respectively.
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addition
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 the amount of power generated is represented based on the force generated by the waves.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wave, turbine, air, clock-wise with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "represents" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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