Some groups, such as poor people or people from rural area find it is difficult to access the university education. Universities should make it especially easy for the students come from the rural areas get an access to the university. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In
modern
era, it is believed by many that Add an article
the modern
students
who come from different rural areas must have easier
route leading to Correct article usage
an easier
university
campuses while
others opine that it should be the authority of university
members to make a track that are
accessible for every Change the verb form
is
students
. Change to a singular noun
student
This
essay will discuss the reasons why i
completely agree with Change the capitalization
I
this
statement
to start with, perhaps one of the reason
why most Change to a plural noun
reasons
students
faced
Wrong verb form
face
this
problem is the lack of transport facility
. Fix the agreement mistake
facilities
This
is because, unlike town
areas, most individuals have to walk for longer Change preposition
in town
period
Fix the agreement mistake
periods
reaching
for bus station in hopes of going to Change the verb form
to reach
university
. secondly
, the roads which have many bumps and curvy lines is
another reason why many Correct subject-verb agreement
are
students
might get
late for their classes. Verb problem
arrive
moreover
, traffic congestion may also
contribute in
Change preposition
to
this
category for instance
, according to
Change the capitalization
Indian
indian
Correct article usage
an indian
Correct your spelling
survey
servey
almost 47% of adults find it hard to continue their Correct your spelling
survey
study
Fix the agreement mistake
studies
due to
lack
of resources Correct article usage
a lack
due to
which they have to abandon their qualification
Fix the agreement mistake
qualifications
of
studying so, Change preposition
apply
for
this
reason
government should Add the comma(s)
reason,
established
roads that have proper transport facility Change the verb form
establish
as well as
proper maintenance of route
Add an article
the route
on the other hand
, universities should play crucial
role by providing proper means of transportation and resources which are accessible to rural places. they should construct their campuses in between rural and urban Add an article
a crucial
area
as Fix the agreement mistake
areas
to
both parties have the same travel distances Change preposition
apply
however
, this
may not resolved
the issue but to some extent might Change the verb form
resolve
reduces
time travelling Wrong verb form
reduce
for example
, in japan
people prefer to use Capitalize word
Japan
train
Add an article
the train
for going
to universities or colleges as it is the easier form of transportation which is cheap and have large open space Change preposition
to go
thus
, by providing transport and resources may help students
greatly
to sum up
, individuals especially university
students
find hard
to reach on time for their classes I strongly Correct pronoun usage
it hard
believed
that if government and campuses work as a team Wrong verb form
believe
this
problem might be solved easily without any hesitationSubmitted by abdulahad08600 on
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