Some groups, such as poor people or people from rural area find it is difficult to access the university education. Universities should make it especially easy for the students come from the rural areas get an access to the university. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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While the essay contains some logical structuring, it would benefit from clearer paragraphing, with topic sentences that introduce the main ideas of each paragraph. Also, ensure a clear progression of ideas and make use of cohesive devices to link ideas and paragraphs appropriately. Introduce a conclusion that effectively summarizes your ideas and reiterates your stance on the topic.

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