Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a sentiment that developed

countries

should facilitate

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of

aids

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to help vulnerable nations. Following that notion, I completely agree because of the following reasons.

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with, the main problem is not always related

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fiscal conditions. In fact, there are several

countries

that actually possess rich resources,

however

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they fail to manage and discover the function of those resources properly because of the limitation in necessary

equipments

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or experts.

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, the gold cave

that

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recently discovered in Syberia

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eventually being

abandoded

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abandoned

by the local government because that country

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not have supporting technologies and experienced people who

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extract and produce the gold materials, resulting

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the opportunity

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the largest gold exporter in the world, which can help boost their national revenues.

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, Syberia

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included

in

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the ten poorest

country

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in the world.

Thus

, it can be said that the primary cause is not always related

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money. Another reason is,

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exemption to give money as a form to aid poor

countries

is more long-lasting. Take,

for example

, the decision to assign 20 medical experts

as well as

advanced medicines from

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Kingdom to overcome the outbreak Polio virus in Mumbai, India has heightened the opportunity

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local Indian doctors to improve their knowledge.

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the first and

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eminent learning

center

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of

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Polio disease in India that operates until

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times.

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, it

also

attracts international

expertise

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experts

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to learn there,

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resulting in the constant growth of the national income in India.

Therefore

, it can be argued that another assistance can

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a greater impact on society in the long run. In conclusion, I completely agree with the argument that

aids

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should be given to

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poorer

countries

in

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various

form

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. It is because the problems that have been faced

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not always correlated with financial conditions, and that kind of help is potentially more everlasting.