The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Auckland and Christchurch, two cities in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, two cities in the United Kingdom.

The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Auckland and Christchurch, two cities in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, two cities in the United Kingdom.
The chart displays the average highest
temperatures
throughout the
year
for two cities each in New Zealand and the United Kingdom. In general, New Zealand experiences a milder climate and higher
temperatures
in comparison to the United Kingdom.
Initially
, Auckland and Christchurch started the new
year
with
temperatures
around 20-25
°C
, which remained stable until April. During the
year
, the weather abruptly changed and became colder, dropping by approximately 10
°C
. In September, the temperature was a cool 15
°C
, but it slowly began to rise as the
year
went on. By the end of the
year
, the weather had become more comfortable, with the temperature reaching around 20
°C
.
By contrast
, cities in the United Kingdom have had much colder weather, with approximately 5
°C
in January.
However
,
this
steadily increased; the highest temperature was recorded at 20
°C
in July, and Edinburgh had jumped slightly to around 17
°C
. As a final comparison note, those cities have seen
temperatures
plummet and become as cold as they were at the beginning of the
year
.
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