The table below shows personal savings as a percentage of personal income for selected countries in 1970, 1990 and 2000. Summarise the information by choosing and reporting the key features, and make any relevant comparisons.

The table below shows personal savings as a percentage of personal income for selected countries in 1970, 1990 and 2000. Summarise the information by choosing and reporting the key features, and make any relevant comparisons.
The table indicates data related to the proportion of personal savings compared to personal income for several countries
such
as Canada,
France
, Germany, Italy, Japan,
UK
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the UK
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and
USA
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the USA
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in 1970, 1990 and 2000. Generally, people in Italy had the most saving percentage
while
the country with the lowest saving proportion was the
USA
. On the one hand, some countries like
France
, Germany, Italy and Japan reached
the
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apply
show examples
double digit
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double-digit
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percentages over those years. People in Italy had the highest rate of personal savings in 1970 at 29.5%, followed by
France
at 18.7 in the same year. In 1990, Italy still held the top percentage at 17.6% and Germany took the second-best position from
France
at 13.8%. Things changed in 2000 as Japan and
France
took the first place as a country with
most
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the highest
show examples
saving
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savings
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rate at roughly 13.6%.
On the other hand
, the
USA
had the lowest proportion of private savings among other countries on the list. The
USA
showed a trend of decline from 8.2% in 1970 to 4.0% in 2000.
Furthermore
, Canada
also
showed an inconsistency over the period,
started
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starting
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at 5.6% in 1970
then
rose
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rising
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until
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to
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11.5% and extremely
declined
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declining
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again to 1.9% in 2000.
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