The table below shows personal savings as a percentage of personal income for selected countries in 1970, 1990 and 2000. Summarise the information by choosing and reporting the key features, and make any relevant comparisons.
The table indicates data related to the proportion of personal savings compared to personal income for several countries
such
as Canada, France
, Germany, Italy, Japan, UK
and Correct article usage
the UK
USA
in 1970, 1990 and 2000.
Generally, people in Italy had the most saving percentage Correct article usage
the USA
while
the country with the lowest saving proportion was the USA
.
On the one hand, some countries like France
, Germany, Italy and Japan reached the
Correct article usage
apply
double digit
percentages over those years. People in Italy had the highest rate of personal savings in 1970 at 29.5%, followed by Add a hyphen
double-digit
France
at 18.7 in the same year. In 1990, Italy still held the top percentage at 17.6% and Germany took the second-best position from France
at 13.8%. Things changed in 2000 as Japan and France
took the first place as a country with most
Correct word choice
the highest
saving
rate at roughly 13.6%.
Replace the word
savings
On the other hand
, the USA
had the lowest proportion of private savings among other countries on the list. The USA
showed a trend of decline from 8.2% in 1970 to 4.0% in 2000. Furthermore
, Canada also
showed an inconsistency over the period, started
at 5.6% in 1970 Wrong verb form
starting
then
rose
Wrong verb form
rising
until
11.5% and extremely Change preposition
to
declined
again to 1.9% in 2000.Wrong verb form
declining
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