The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the range of
energy
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used in Australian households and the percentage of greenhouse gas
emissions
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produced.
Overall
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, the most used
energy
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in Australia is heating, which has the smallest impact.
Conversely
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, other
energy
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such
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as water heating, refrigeration, cooling, lighting, and other appliances had a bigger proportion of
emissions
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than the total
energy
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utilized. First of all, the majority of domestic use is 42% for heating. Surprisingly, it had the lowest pollution at 15%.
On the other hand
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, the two different
energy
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uses produce slightly greater
emissions
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. Water heating is the second-highest Australian use at 30% with 32% of resulting
emissions
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.
Then
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, cooling is the lowest percentage used at 2% with 3% of pollution produced.
Furthermore
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, the
energy
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used for lighting, refrigeration, and other appliances had double the
emissions
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than the average consumed. Lighting is used by 4% and produces pollution up to 8%, followed by refrigeration used at 7% with 14% of
emissions
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, and other appliances consumed by 15% with 28% of resulting
emissions
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.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, emissions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Average Australian household
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Energy consumption
  • Activities
  • Heating
  • Cooling
  • Water heating
  • Appliances
  • Lighting
  • Standby
  • Percentage (%)
  • Consumption patterns
  • Efficiency
  • Emissions impact
  • Renewable energy
  • Energy-saving measures
  • Sustainability
  • Carbon footprint
  • Electricity
  • Natural gas
  • Emissions breakdown
  • Energy audit
  • Environmental impact
  • Conservation
  • Mitigation strategies
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