The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the range of
energy
used in Australian households and the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions
produced.
Overall
, the most used energy
in Australia is heating, which has the smallest impact. Conversely
, other energy
such
as water heating, refrigeration, cooling, lighting, and other appliances had a bigger proportion of emissions
than the total energy
utilized.
First of all, the majority of domestic use is 42% for heating. Surprisingly, it had the lowest pollution at 15%. On the other hand
, the two different energy
uses produce slightly greater emissions
. Water heating is the second-highest Australian use at 30% with 32% of resulting emissions
. Then
, cooling is the lowest percentage used at 2% with 3% of pollution produced.
Furthermore
, the energy
used for lighting, refrigeration, and other appliances had double the emissions
than the average consumed. Lighting is used by 4% and produces pollution up to 8%, followed by refrigeration used at 7% with 14% of emissions
, and other appliances consumed by 15% with 28% of resulting emissions
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, emissions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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