you recently organised an all- day meeting for your compagny, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participant at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were un happy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter - say what the participants liked about the hotel - explain why they were unhappy about the food - suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to submit my feedback about the meetings of the company Where

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in

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the Palza

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Palza

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Plaza

Hotel.As I was organiser of the event was going well and participants of the meetings liked the hotel unless the lunch meals.

Firstly

, all the

staffs

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who work there were

warm

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welcome and the reception has a

comfort

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sitting with fascinating

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.

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, the meeting hall

provided

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system air

conditionan

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conditioning

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and excellent light.

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, you can

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the cleanest of the hotel even the toilets ,

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all participants were very pleasant and convenient

while

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inconvenient

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with the main lunch. The restaurant was open late after an hour of waiting which

effect on

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the meeting time, The

cuisines

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cold with un-fresh Salad and fruit ,

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they were unfamiliar dishes

with

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the customers leading some individuals

remain

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to remain

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hunger

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instead

of eating foreign meals. Kindly, I suppose

from

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you

to

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take much care of the lunch services to

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the

hotels

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commitment to

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quality.

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out by

service diversity

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serving diverse

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flavoure foods which

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all

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nationalities.

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prepare the meals

in particular

dishes to remain hot at

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of service. I hope to take my consideration and looking forward to your response. Faithfully yours. Enas