you recently organised an all- day meeting for your compagny, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participant at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were un happy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter - say what the participants liked about the hotel - explain why they were unhappy about the food - suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to submit my feedback about the meetings of the company Where
hold
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held
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the Palza
Palza
Hotel.As I was organiser of the event was going well and participants of the meetings liked the hotel unless the lunch meals.Correct your spelling
Plaza
Firstly
, all the staffs
who work there were Fix the agreement mistake
staff
warm
welcome and the reception has a Change the word
warmly
comfort
sitting with fascinating Replace the word
comfortable
decoration
.Fix the agreement mistake
decorations
Additionally
, the meeting hall provided
by Add a missing verb
is provided
control
system air Correct article usage
a control
conditionan
and excellent light.Correct your spelling
conditioning
conditioner
Evenmore
, you can Correct your spelling
Even more
notice
the cleanest of the hotel even the toilets
,Rephrase
even notice
Hence
all participants were very pleasant and convenient while
other
Fix the agreement mistake
others
inconvenient
with the main lunch.
The restaurant was open late after an hour of waiting which Add a missing verb
were inconvenient
effect on
the meeting time,
The Correct your spelling
affected
cuisines
Fix the agreement mistake
cuisine
Were
cold with un-fresh Salad and fruit ,Correct subject-verb agreement
Was
Also
they were unfamiliar dishes Rephrase
apply
with
the customers leading some individuals Change preposition
to
remain
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to remain
hunger
Replace the word
hungry
instead
of eating foreign meals.
Kindly, I suppose from
you Change preposition
apply
to
take much care of the lunch services to Fix the infinitive
apply
insure
the Correct your spelling
ensure
hotels
commitment to Change to a genitive case
hotel's
hotels'
the
quality. Correct article usage
apply
This
quality reach
out by Change the verb form
reaches
service diversity
flavoure foods which Replace the word
serving diverse
matching
all Wrong verb form
match
the
nationalities.
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apply
Also
prepare the meals Add a comma
Also,
in particular
dishes to remain hot at time
of service.
I hope to take my consideration and looking forward to your response.
Faithfully yours.
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