The three pie charts illustrate how many hours undergraduates, postgraduates and total student population spent in a British university library.
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hours
undergraduates, postgraduates and total
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the total
student
population spent in a British university library.
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students
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library
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students
or either
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apply
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.
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postgraduates spent at least 15 Add a hyphen
one-half
hours
in comparison with average
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the average
student
. The numbers were 51 per cent
and fifteen
per Correct your spelling
15
cent
respectively. In addition
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postgraduate
students
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student
in this
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students
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hours
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