The Diagram below Shows The Recycling Process of Plastics.

The Diagram below Shows The Recycling Process of Plastics.
The diagram
illustates
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illustrates
how the recycling plastics are processed in order to produce a range of plastics.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the man-made
linier
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linear
process
of smaller
plastic
items and bags has
discarded
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been discarded
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in landfills,
while
some
plastic
goods had recycled after
used
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being used
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. The following paragraphs will describe the recycling
process
of
plastic
waste.
Firts
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First
of all, when the product of
plastic
sholdout
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holdout
sold out
soldout
in
shop
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the shop
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so that the people
buyed
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bought
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for buying and
using
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use
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.
Following
this
, the
products
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plastic products
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of
plastic
likely
bottles
from people who are buying and using neither
has
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have been
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collected to
contineu
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continue
recycling
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the recycling
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process
or dumped
to
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into
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bags and rubbish in
landfill
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landfills
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. Regarding to recycling
process
of
plastic
, the
bottles
of
plastic
are being collected by colour, size and shape.
Next,
the
bottles
of
plastic
are
being
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sorted
in house
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and continue with,
the
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and the
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bottles
of
plastic
has
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have
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been delivered by truck. And
then
, the
plactic
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plastic
are
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is
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being processed in
factory
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a factory
the factory
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. The
last
process
are
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is
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being
producted
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produced
protected
by the new products of
plastic
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, plastic, bottles with synonyms.
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