The Diagram below Shows The Recycling Process of Plastics.
The diagram
illustates
how the recycling plastics are processed in order to produce a range of plastics. Correct your spelling
illustrates
Overall
, it is clear that
the man-made linier
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linear
process
of smaller plastic
items and bags has discarded
in landfills, Add a missing verb
been discarded
while
some plastic
goods had recycled after used
. The following paragraphs will describe the recycling Add a missing verb
being used
process
of plastic
waste.
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of all, when the product of Correct your spelling
First
plastic
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in Correct your spelling
holdout
sold out
soldout
shop
so that the people Add an article
the shop
buyed
for buying and Correct your spelling
bought
using
. Replace the word
use
Following
this
, the products
of Correct word choice
plastic products
plastic
likely bottles
from people who are buying and using neither has
collected to Wrong verb form
have been
contineu
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continue
recycling
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the recycling
process
or dumped to
bags and rubbish in Change preposition
into
landfill
.
Regarding to recycling Fix the agreement mistake
landfills
process
of plastic
, the bottles
of plastic
are being collected by colour, size and shape. Next,
the bottles
of plastic
are being
sorted Unnecessary verb
apply
in house
and continue with, Add a hyphen
in-house
the
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and the
bottles
of plastic
has
been delivered by truck. And Change the verb form
have
then
, the plactic
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plastic
are
being processed in Change the verb form
is
factory
. The Add an article
a factory
the factory
last
process
are
being Change the verb form
is
producted
by the new products of Correct your spelling
produced
protected
plastic
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