The two maps below show the changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present day.

The two maps below show the changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present day.
The two maps
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reveal the alters in
town
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the town
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of Den
ham
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Ham
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from 1986 to the present day.
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,
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number of buildings were built and expanded. The most noticeable change is that farmland in the east-south of the River Stoke and between a bridge and a primary school
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no more exists.
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, large houses in the gardens were reconstructed into
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retirement
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,
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reconstruction was accompanied by
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down of
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tree
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along the way. 46 new houses have been built since 1986.
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new dwellings were built in the west of the road,
consequently
in the east side only 20 new frames were framed.
Also
, there are no shops in the present,
that is
two shops were knocked down and replaced by other things.
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