The graph below shows the amount in grams of potatoes, pasta and rice eaten in a European country between 1976 and 2006.
The line chart shows the average weekly gramme intake of
potatoes
, pasta
and rice
per person
in a European country starting in 1976. Pasta
consumption
climbed dramatically while
potato and rice
consumption
decreased.
Now turning our attention back to the specifics, the starting consumption
of potatoes
was greater than 400 grammes
per person
in a week, but the consumption
of rice
and pasta
was approximately 300 grammes
. The consumption
of pasta
steadily increased from 1976 to 1996,
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then
remained relatively stable until it reached its all-time high in 2006,
when it was roughly 500 Remove the comma
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grammes
per person
in a week. On the other hand
, the consumption
of potatoes
had some wavering behaviour between the years 1976 and 1996. In addition
, the consumption
of potatoes
reached a record low in 2006, averaging only about 100 grammes
per person
per week.
From 1976 to 1996, there is
a definite uptick and subsequent slight decline in Wrong verb form
was
rice
consumption
. But in one European country, rice
consumption
rose from 2001 to 2006. During that time, people consumed only slightly more than 200 grammes
per day, down from 300 grammes
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