The graph below shows the amount in grams of potatoes, pasta and rice eaten in a European country between 1976 and 2006.

The graph below shows the amount in grams of potatoes, pasta and rice eaten in a European country between 1976 and 2006.
The line chart shows the average weekly gramme intake of
potatoes
,
pasta
and
rice
per
person
in a European country starting in 1976.
Pasta
consumption
climbed dramatically
while
potato and
rice
consumption
decreased. Now turning our attention back to the specifics, the starting
consumption
of
potatoes
was greater than 400
grammes
per
person
in a week, but the
consumption
of
rice
and
pasta
was approximately 300
grammes
. The
consumption
of
pasta
steadily increased from 1976 to 1996
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and
then
remained relatively stable until it reached its all-time high in 2006
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when it was roughly 500
grammes
per
person
in a week.
On the other hand
, the
consumption
of
potatoes
had some wavering behaviour between the years 1976 and 1996.
In addition
, the
consumption
of
potatoes
reached a record low in 2006, averaging only about 100
grammes
per
person
per week. From 1976 to 1996, there
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a definite uptick and subsequent slight decline in
rice
consumption
. But in one European country,
rice
consumption
rose from 2001 to 2006. During that time, people consumed only slightly more than 200
grammes
per day, down from 300
grammes
.
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