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The graph below shows the amount in grams of potatoes, pasta and rice eaten in a European country between 1976 and 2006.

The graph below shows the amount in grams of potatoes, pasta and rice eaten in a European country between 1976 and 2006.
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The line chart illustrates
potatoes
,
pasta
 and
rice
 weight in
grams
 which
consumed
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were consumed
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 in a particular
Europian Country
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European country
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 during 40
years
 from 1976 to 2006.
Overall
, it can be seen that
potatoes
 experienced a sharp decline
while
pasta
 was stable and
rice
 slightly increased
at the end
 of
period
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the period
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. Looking in more detail,
Pasta
 and
Rice
 stood at about 300
grams
 in 1976. For
pasta
, there was a significant increase until 1996
and
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followed by stable consumption for 10
years
. Meanwhile,
Rice
 experienced a gradual fall,
then
 it slightly rose
about
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to about
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 200
grams
 in 2006. In the meantime,
potatoes
 fluctuated slightly throughout
years
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the years
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which
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began
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beginning
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over
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with over
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 400
grams
 consumption of
potatoes
 at the beginning.
Next,
it significantly grew for 5
years
 and
followed
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was followed
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 by some fluctuations until 1996.
Then
, the demand for
potatoes
 sharply decreased
at the end
 of time.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words potatoes, pasta, rice, grams, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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