Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To that extent do you agree or disagree.
Schools are fundamentally
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designed for academic success and examinations, Correct your spelling
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schools should make time for both subjects and give them equal value.
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part of the nature of going to school. When an individual performs well in Correct subject-verb agreement
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subjects like, cookery, dressmaking and woodwork, are fundamentals that every pupil should be taught. Usually, it is believed that learning Change preposition
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crafts should be the responsibility of the family or their friends. Whilst, Linking Words
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true, it is better if Correct your spelling
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concepts were introduced into the curriculum, as students will develop a natural interest in these matters. Learning about cookery and woodwork are basic life skills that every child should be equipped with, and are needed throughout their lives just as much as exams. Linking Words
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, dressmaking and baking could provide a good break from other more stressful subjects, like maths, and encourage children to look forward to performing Linking Words
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tasks.
In conclusion, I disagree with the notion that schools should just focus on results and academics, rather there should be an equal opportunity for both skill sets to be learntLinking Words
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