Fresh water has become a global problem for the whole world what are the reasons for this what measures should be taken by the government and the individual to solve the problem Give reasons and examples for your answer
Fresh
water
is one of the major problem
in the modern Change to a plural noun
problems
world
because it is considered as a most inevitable thing. There are many reasons. One of the primary reason
is polluted rivers and canals, for the Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
water
materials disposed
by factories. The second reason is Add the preposition
disposed of
fresh
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freshwater
water
resources
are limited in the modern world
.
To
the beginning, Change preposition
From
fresh
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freshwater
water
resource is the most inevitable resource in the world
. Factories dispose
the waste materials in the rivers and canals. It Add the preposition
dispose of
also
distracted the purity of water
. Adequate fresh
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freshwater
water
resources
is
not available. Change the verb form
are
For instance
, most of the fresh
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freshwater
water
resources
are disposed
in glaciers. Add the preposition
disposed of
That is
the major reason is the insufficiency of fresh water
.
On the other side, there are various steps taken by government
. Add an article
the government
This
problem can be easily avoided. One of the main strategy it
is implementing strict rules and regulations can Replace the word
strategies
helpful to
save fresh Wrong verb form
help
water
.
Additionally
, proper awareness program
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programs
helpful
to people to Add a missing verb
are helpful
aware
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be aware
the
importance of Change preposition
of the
water
resources
. This
is the most convenient method to maintain ecosystem
. Add an article
the ecosystem
For instance
, in the
innovative technology, technological Correct article usage
apply
world
importance and growth is
mesmerizing. Innovative Change the verb form
are
way
to handle purifiers and Fix the agreement mistake
ways
other type
of can Change the wording
another type
other types
helpful
to obtain fresh Add a missing verb
be helpful
water
.
To be conclude
, Change the verb form
conclude
fresh
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freshwater
water
resource is limited in the world
. However
, every people
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person who
understand
and Correct subject-verb agreement
understands
study
the importance of Correct subject-verb agreement
studies
water
can maintain and stable
the fresh Replace the word
stabilise
water
resources
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