Fresh water has become a global problem for the whole world what are the reasons for this what measures should be taken by the government and the individual to solve the problem Give reasons and examples for your answer

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Fresh

water

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is one of the major

problem

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in the modern

world

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because it is considered as a most inevitable thing. There are many reasons. One of the primary

reason

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is polluted rivers and canals, for the

water

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materials

disposed

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by factories. The second reason is

fresh

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freshwater

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water

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resources

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are limited in the modern

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the beginning,

fresh

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freshwater

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water

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resource is the most inevitable resource in the

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. Factories

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the waste materials in the rivers and canals. It

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distracted the purity of

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. Adequate

fresh

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freshwater

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water

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resources

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not available.

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, most of the

fresh

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freshwater

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water

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are

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in glaciers.

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the major reason is the insufficiency of fresh

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. On the other side, there are various steps taken by

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problem can be easily avoided. One of the main

strategy it

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is implementing strict rules and regulations can

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save fresh

water

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, proper awareness

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helpful

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to people to

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the

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importance of

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resources

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is the most convenient method to maintain

ecosystem

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the ecosystem

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innovative technology, technological

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importance and growth

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mesmerizing. Innovative

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to handle purifiers and

other type

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of can

helpful

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to obtain fresh

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be conclude

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fresh

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freshwater

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water

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resource is limited in the

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, every

people

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understand

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understands

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and

study

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the importance of

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can maintain and

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the fresh

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logical structure

Ensure your essay has a clear and logical structure. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea and there should be clear transitions between ideas and paragraphs.

introduction conclusion present

Always include both an introduction and a conclusion that encapsulate the main points of your essay effectively.

supported main points

Support your main points with specific examples and explanations. General statements are less effective in illustrating your arguments.

complete response

Respond to all parts of the task. Ensure that your response fully addresses the reasons for the water problem as well as the measures that should be taken by both the government and individuals.

clear comprehensive ideas

Develop your ideas fully and clearly. Each paragraph should explore a specific aspect of the topic in depth.

relevant specific examples

Include specific, relevant examples to support your arguments. Link these examples directly to the points you are making.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

for example
for instance
to illustrate this
to give a clear example
such as
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take, for example

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

231 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Overpopulation
Industrialization
Pollution
Climate change
Droughts
Agricultural practices
Infrastructure
Leakages
Efficient water usage
Over-extraction
Groundwater
Water tables
Water conservation
Regulation
Sustainable development
Rainwater harvesting
Desalination
Public awareness campaigns
Legislation
Water management
Water scarcity
Recycling
Reuse
Greywater systems

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