Fast food is becoming one part of life everywhere; this bad effects on our lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays,we have noticed that fast
food
has changed our
life
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.
This
has an impact
in
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on
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our life and dietary habits.I'm in complete agreement that fast
food
effects
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affects
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badly on us
,since
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badly,since
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this
is harmful
for
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to
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health
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our health
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and it destroys our mental
health
.I will delve deep and discuss more in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with,folks do not have time to cook
by
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on
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their own,because of their work.So,they often purchase junk
food
to be more energetic
in
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at
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work.
However
,it is harmful
for
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to
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the
health
.Eating junk
food
regularly will lead to different illnesses,
such
as obesity,heart disease and diabetes
due to
high
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the high
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calorie,sugar, and fat content in fast
food
.
For instance
,we know that many citizens of America are very fat.
As well as
they often order and eat fat-prepared meals.
Also
,in
America
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America,
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fast
food
companies and
restaraunts
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restaurants
have
an
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a
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huge popularity among inhabitants.So,they buy fast
food
with pleasure.
Secondly
,our mental
health
is destroyed by ordering and eating fast
food
.Our brain always wants to rest and relax.That's why,tells us signals to just order some meals rather than cook at home.
As a result
,in today's
society
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society,
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too many individuals have become
so
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lazy and sluggish.What's more,some of them are addicted to fast
food
.
For example
,
firstly
people used to order fast
food
,
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since they did not have time.And
then
,it started slowly to become
in
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to bad habit.And now, they can't live a day without
a fast
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fast food
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food
,they have become excessively fat, their mindset is weak and poor.
Also
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they have become lazy and inactive.
To sum up
,as fast
food
entered our
life
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lives
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it completely changed people and
the
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their
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way of living.
As a consequence
,
a
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numerous people struggle with many diseases.
In addition
,fast
food
has made them weak-minded,lazy and addicted.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Proliferation
  • Obesity
  • Diabetes
  • Caloric intake
  • Addictive
  • Nutritional deficit
  • Culinary traditions
  • Healthcare expenditure
  • Immediate gratification
  • Lifestyle diseases
  • Homogenization
  • Processed foods
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