The chart below shows the proportion of profits made from the seven most viewed movies

The given bar chart provides information on the ratio of revenues generated by the seven most popular film genres in the United States in 1995, 2000, and 2005 as a proportion of the

overall

income of the US moving picture industry for each year.

Overall

, adventure, thriller, and musicals fluctuated over the ten years

while

comedy and animation had incremental behaviour,

as well as

action and drama had a decremental behaviour. It has been witnessed that the apex of all three adventure, comedy, and animation touched in the year 2005. The bottommost percentage of revenues among all seven movies was generated by musicals in 2005 with a figure of 2.5%.

Furthermore

, the dominant percentage of profit between 1995 to 2005 was produced by drama with a figure of 27% in 1995 which is almost the same proportion of income generated by comedy in 2005.

Moreover

, the ratio of adventure in 1995 is almost one-half of the revenue generated in 2005.

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The chart below shows the proportion of profits made from the seven most viewed movies

in spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry, why is this the case? what can be done about this problem?

Many people argue that in order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to make comments or even criticism of their teachers. Other think it will lead to loss of respects and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.