Advertisements are the most important marketing startegy to enhance the sale of products ? Do you agree or disagree?
The most essential thing is advertisements in contemporary
due to
viral a
become for it. Correct article usage
apply
However
, the best way to boost sale
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sales
goods
is online which is the most suitable aspect. I completely agree with Change preposition
of goods
this
statement.
Based on this
situation, almost million
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a million
of
products are day by day Change preposition
apply
become
so popular Wrong verb form
becoming
due to
their advertising. Moreover
, world all people are
rely on Unnecessary verb
apply
network
and Fix the agreement mistake
networks
they
watching
television to make a good future. Correct pronoun usage
apply
For example
, half of Add an article
the world
world
men are suffering their job Change noun form
world's
crisis
whenever they Fix the agreement mistake
crises
would be
watch it Verb problem
apply
then
it would become
fulfill their future. So Verb problem
apply
that
advertising is Correct word choice
apply
really
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a really
the really
satisfied
aspect to enjoy Replace the word
satisfying
with
watching Change preposition
apply
movie
or news.
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movies
On the other hand
, advertising is not satisfied side becuse
of that most of the advertising is Correct your spelling
because
watch
to good but it has Add an article
a watch
the watch
negative
impact on our daily life Add an article
a negative
such
as, Correct quantifier usage
apply
in
the Change preposition
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last
month i
bought a Change the capitalization
I
goods
which was not a good product to use Correct the article-noun agreement
good
my
daily life Change preposition
in my
due to
their product isn’t same like advertisements, However
, this
negative side can be bring
destroy our future so that government should take to proper step behind these people who are providing it for local people watch.
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bring
To sum up
, it must be said that advantage
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the advantage
perfection
is better than Change preposition
of perfection
disadvantage
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the disadvantage
drawbacks
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and drawbacks
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