The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram gives information about how
glass
is recycled.
overall
, it can be clearly seen that the recycling process of glass
has 6 steps from collecting the waste glass
items to reshape
and Wrong verb form
reshaping
to
Verb problem
apply
redistrubute
them again.
Fat the first stage, Correct your spelling
redistributing
glass
bottles are collected in a recycle bin which is then
transported to Correct article usage
the treatment
treatment
plant for Correct article usage
the treatment
further
processing. In the treatment plant items are being washed and sterilized in the machines. the cleaned glass
bottles are then
crushed and melted by machines to reshape them with moulding machines in the next phase.
Lastly
, after giving the shape to the glasses which were recycled now they are ready to deliver to supermarkets for sales
Fix the agreement mistake
sale
as well as
finds its
use for bottling purpose in various industries. These Correct pronoun usage
apply
glass
bottles after use are again disposed
in the recycle bins, which starts over the process of recycling.Add the preposition
disposed of
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