The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how glass is recycled.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram gives information about how
glass
is recycled.
overall
, it can be clearly seen that the recycling process of
glass
has 6 steps from collecting the waste
glass
items to
reshape
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reshaping
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and
to
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redistrubute
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redistributing
them again. Fat the first stage,
glass
bottles are collected in a recycle bin which is
then
transported to
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the treatment
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treatment
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the treatment
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plant for
further
processing. In the treatment plant items are being washed and sterilized in the machines. the cleaned
glass
bottles are
then
crushed and melted by machines to reshape them with moulding machines in the next phase.
Lastly
, after giving the shape to the glasses which were recycled now they are ready to deliver to supermarkets for
sales
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as well as
finds
its
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apply
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use for bottling purpose in various industries. These
glass
bottles after use are again
disposed
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disposed of
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in the recycle bins, which starts over the process of recycling.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words glass with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • recycled
  • stages
  • collection
  • waste glass
  • sources
  • bottles
  • jars
  • windows
  • transported
  • recycling facility
  • sorted
  • color
  • processes
  • cleaned
  • impurities
  • labels
  • caps
  • crushed
  • cullet
  • raw material
  • melted
  • furnace
  • temperature
  • molded
  • new glass products
  • distribution
  • consumers
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