You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, describe the training course you want to do explain what the company could do to help you say how the course will be useful for your job Write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr. Moeyaert
I am Simranpreet Kaur Bhullar, working as a sales associate in the Sales and Marketing Department. I am writing to ask your permission for a training
course
in cardiopulmonary resuscitation as per
requested by the HR department.
Let me explain my situation. I am the only person who Correct word choice
apply
is earning
in my family, so it would be helpful if Wrong verb form
earns
company
could cover all the charges Add an article
the company
a company
of
Change preposition
for
this
course
. Moreover
, one of the office colleague
has suggested Change to a plural noun
colleagues
me
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I
to
do Fix the infinitive
apply
this
course
from Brantford, as there is one institute which offers CPR training and assures to
finish the Correct pronoun usage
me to
course
in one day. Additionally
, the price of training is also
reasonable.
As per my knowledge, the individual who has the CPR training is leaving the job this
month and there should be someone with cardiopulmonary resuscitation training in the office to deal with an emergency situation. Apart from
this
, if you are agree
with these lessons, please approve my vacation for next Friday, so that I can book the Change the verb form
agree
course
in advance.
I look forward to hear
from Change the verb form
hearing
at
the earliest. If you have any concerns, please let me know.
Yours faithfully,
Simranpreet Kaur BhullarCorrect pronoun usage
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear and distinct idea, refrain from merging different requests or explanations within the same paragraph for better clarity.
coherence cohesion
Start the letter with a proper salutation such as 'Dear [Manager's Name],' and always include a sign-off, such as 'Sincerely' or 'Regards,' before your name to maintain professionalism.
task achievement
Make sure to address all parts of the task clearly. The letter should explain the course in greater detail, how exactly it can benefit the job, and present a more compelling case for why the company should support it.
task achievement
Maintain a more formal tone throughout the letter. Avoid using casual language or phrases that may seem too informal for a professional setting.