This diagram shows the process of wool production. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

This diagram shows the process of wool production. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the main steps of the
wool
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manufacture.
Overall
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, the animal which is used for the
wool
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production is sheep.
Additionally
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, the whole process is complex and it undergoes thirteen stages, starting with selecting a sheep for shearing and ending up with a knitting stage.
To begin
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with, once the sheep
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delivered, they need to be sheared manually and only
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, the fur is being properly cleaned and dried. After that, before
recieveing
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receiving
wool
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, the spinning process begins, sending the remaining string to recycle.
The next step is
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to prepare tufts of
wool
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, followed by storing them in a special storage place.
Then
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, the balls of yarn can be taken from the storehouse,
which
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and
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are exploited either for knitting or for making carpets and jackets.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words wool with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Wool production
  • Shearing
  • Raw wool
  • Scouring
  • Carding
  • Spinning
  • Yarn
  • Weaving
  • Knitting
  • Dyeing
  • Textile
  • Fabric
  • Quality control
  • Sustainable farming
  • Textile industry
  • Livestock
  • Fiber
  • Manufacturing process
  • Natural resources
  • Eco-friendly
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