This diagram shows the process of wool production. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the main steps of the
wool
manufacture.
Overall
, the animal which is used for the wool
production is sheep. Additionally
, the whole process is complex and it undergoes thirteen stages, starting with selecting a sheep for shearing and ending up with a knitting stage.
To begin
with, once the sheep were
delivered, they need to be sheared manually and only Wrong verb form
are
then
, the fur is being properly cleaned and dried. After that, before recieveing
Correct your spelling
receiving
wool
, the spinning process begins, sending the remaining string to recycle.
The next step is
to prepare tufts of wool
, followed by storing them in a special storage place. Then
, the balls of yarn can be taken from the storehouse, which
are exploited either for knitting or for making carpets and jackets.Correct word choice
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