Some people think that parents should teach their children to be good members of society. However, others believe School is the best place to learn this.

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should teach their children to become
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society
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learn
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school
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notion can be beneficial,
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in my opinion
parents
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should teach their children to become
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good
citizens
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School
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is a good
place
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to learn how to become
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good members
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members
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of a
society
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means there are teachers who
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about
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society
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more than their students, which helps to guide them and helps
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them to
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become
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better
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society
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the USA
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, a
school
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has started teaching about
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to their students which helps them to become
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good citizens
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citizens
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in future.
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school
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is one of the best
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place
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to learn,
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become a good
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members
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. I
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believe
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parents
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should tutor their
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to become
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better citizens
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citizens
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because
parents
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know their
childs
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children
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better than anyone in the world and
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they know
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their community than any other random people. It means that
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parents
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know their
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since their birth and they know
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their
every
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behaviour
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and
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activity
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, they know about
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their
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society
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more than other people people from different societies like
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teachers
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and other
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from different
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society
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societies
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,
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started teaching
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kid's
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kids
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positive and
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their
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.
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may help
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to
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kids
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to become better
citizens
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in
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comming
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coming
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parents are
better teachers for their sons and daughters to become
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good members
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members
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of the community. In conclusion,
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can be a good
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for
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to learn and become
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good
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members
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. But, I believe
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are the best
tutor's
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tutors
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for
kids
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to become
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better citizens
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citizens
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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