Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Mr. Manager,
I'm
resident
of King Harvest Correct article usage
a resident
Dowmtown
, and my daily journey is to the Correct your spelling
Downtown
officw
which is located at 11 Correct your spelling
office
street
, Alberta. from 08:00am to 06:00pm.
I would like to bring into your account that from the Capitalize word
Street
last
week facing the issue about the unexpected schedule of bus route number A40. The time
of the buses as per timeline every 30hrs but suddenly it is change to 45 minutes delay and this
happening from last
two weeks. Moreover
some time
bus comes on tume as scheduled but timeline still showing the delayed.
This
siutation makes me confused taht which time
I must nrrd to foolow and a couple of time
reached office late bacuase of the conflict of time
of the bus.
From my side it is suggesting that if possible to ask the back- end team to check either this
is a technical issue or something else. it would be really appericiated if you put it on your Red flag task.
I am looking forward to resolve this
issue earliest.
Regards,
AASubmitted by engrtalah on
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Coherence and Cohesion
The letter should be structured into paragraphs with clear separation of the introduction, body (describing the problem, explaining its impact, suggesting solutions), and the conclusion. Each paragraph should focus on one central idea. Consider carefully structuring your response to make it easier to read and follow.
Task Achievement
Make sure to use clear and relevant expressions to convey your points. Avoid using informal language in a formal letter.
Language Proficiency
Pay attention to spelling, punctuation, and grammar. Mistakes in these areas can obscure the meaning and reduce the effectiveness of your communication.
Tone Appropriateness
The closing of your letter should be polite and should reflect the nature of the communication, which in this case is a formal complaint.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite