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The pie charts below compare the proportion of energy capacity in gigawatts (GW) in 2015 with the predictions for 2040.

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The pie charts provide
comparison
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on
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 the amount of generated
energy
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 from four
sources
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 that measured in gigawatts (GW) in 2015 and its forecast in 2040. 
Overall
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, the amount of produced
energy
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 will likely
to
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apply
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increase with the fossil fuels usage
is
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still dominating the production,
while
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 nuclear and solar will likely to
exchange
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 as the least
sources
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 to produce it.  In 2015, 64%
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energy
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of energy
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in
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this
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 planet
is
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 taken from
the
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apply
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fossil fuels, which is predicted to be reduced by 20% in 2040,
while
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 the usage of other
sources
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rise
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. Some case
also
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 happens to other renewables and nuclear
sources
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 as their utilisation only take 21% and 5% respectively, with
one
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a one
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until
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 two
percent
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 reduction from the quantity in 2015.
In addition
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, nuclear happens to be the least
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sources
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source
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 that produces
energy
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 among others. 
Conversely
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,
energy
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sources
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 like solar and wind
bound
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 to have a flowering growth on their amount of
energy
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, which in total dominated one-third
from
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 the total 11.678 GW IN 2040.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, sources with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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