The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two layouts illustrate how an industrial area in the
town
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of Norbiton will change and
develope
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develop
in the future program.
Overall
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, it is obviously seen that there will be several facilities
at
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the
town
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instead
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of factories.
However
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, the river and the southern road will just experience small changes.
According to
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the maps, the accessibility to the
center
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centre
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of the
town
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will be expanded from north and western north with two new roads. All of the factories in the
town
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will be disappeared.
In contrast
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, a school, a playground, a medical
center
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and shops will be relocated.
Additionally
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, in
this
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area, new
housings
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are
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planned. A square and a blockage road will be added to the south and north of
main
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field.
On the other hand
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, the central square will remain at the same level and the
town
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will not experience any expansion geographically. It will limited
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a river and a road from the north and the south, respectively.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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