You are having a party. Write an invitation letter to your friend. In your message you should • explain why you are having the party • tell her when and where it is • say who will be there • what to bring/wear etc Write a letter

Dear, Beka. I'm writing
you
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to inform you about the
party
, which is going to be next Saturday. It's my
brother
's birthday
party
, by the way, he really wants you to come. So I beg you, don'
t
disappoint him and try to come, I'm doing it for my
brother
, not for myself. The
party
will take place in the park "Winslin" we will be having
a
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fun, playing
footbal
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football
and doing other activities, after that we will go to the restaurant next to the park. There we will be eating
entire
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the entire
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menu, yes, it seems to be crazy, but it was my
brother
's wish. So be prepared. It finishes at 7 p.m. I hope you don'
t
mind. There won'
t
be a lot of people at the
party
, we
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only relatives and friends. At least, 25 people will be, so don'
t
concern yourself at the
party
, there will be your acquaintances too. Be open-minded and positive.
Moreover
, about the dress, you
allowed
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to choose by yourself, but it isn'
t
permitted to wear something weird.
Also
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you must bring a present
,
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since my
brother
loves presents. One of his desires
:
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is, book
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book
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about adventure. So that's all you must do. The goal of our
party
is to amuse everyone and we assure you that you leave
party
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the party
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with the best memories. So, that's all that I want to say. I hope you will accept my invitation. Best regards, Azar.
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task achievement
Include an opening phrase that sets a friendly tone for the invitation.
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Ensure proper use of formal or informal language according to the context of inviting a friend.
coherence cohesion
Structure the invitation with distinct paragraphs for the purpose of the party, details of the event, and instructions for the guest.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a consistent and orderly presentation of details throughout the letter.
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Be precise about the necessary information, like the date and time of the party, without being indirect or vague.
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Ensure that the closing of the letter reiterates the invitation warmly and looks forward to the person's attendance.
coherence cohesion
Use a variety of sentence structures and vocabulary to demonstrate language control.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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