The line graph shows the number of active daily users of Facebook in 3 different countries.
The line graph represents the
number
of active social media users
, Facebook
, Change preposition
on Facebook
of
3 various nations (Vietnam, Cambodia and Thailand). Units are measured in Change preposition
in
million
.
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millions
Overall
it can be seen that people using the platform in Thailand and Vietnam had a huge leap taken over the years. Users
in Cambodia in contrast
, was
fluctuation throughout the years.
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Firstly
, In the initial year
, 25 million
of
Thai citizens were using Change preposition
apply
Facebook
but, gradually
declined to almost 15 Correct pronoun usage
this gradually
million
in 2010. Furthermore
, the population using Facebook
plunged down to 5 million
within 4 years of time
frame and remained constant in the Add an article
the time
year
2014. Starting from 5 million
in year
2007, the Change the article
the year
users
in Vietnam kept inclining and reached Correct quantifier usage
number of users
to
more than 15 Change preposition
apply
million
2010
. With no going back the Change preposition
in 2010
number
of Facebook
users
sky rocked to more than 25 million
in year
2014 and Change the article
the year
marked
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marking
highest
Add an article
the highest
number
of population
to use the platform.
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the population
Similarly
, the users
in Cambodia reached approximately 14 million
in 2007 and took a downward turn in year
2009 with roughly 11 Change the article
the year
millions
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million
of
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apply
users
. Then
the number
of Cambodian users
palpitated
to about 17 Verb problem
increased
million
and just under 10 million
in year
2012 and 2013 respectively. In 2014 the total number
reached its peak (around 19 millions
).Change to singular
million
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