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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed beacuse of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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Because of
technology
, in
this
era
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 the way
communication
 with each other in society
was
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has
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 changed. I strongly believe that
technology
infuence
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influences
 in ways of
convinience
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convenience
communication
 in long
distance
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distances
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 with each other.
This
 impact brings
a
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apply
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positive
development
such
 as supporting
easiness
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the easiness
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 of
communication
 and negative
development
 like lessening social ability. One hand,
technology
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technology's
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 impact can support
easiness
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the easiness
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 of
communication's
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communication with
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people
.
Development
 of
technology
 manufactured several platforms
such
 as email,
whatsapp
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WhatsApp
Whatsapp
 and other applications without to go to
telephone
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a telephone
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 booth to call
other
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others
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. They
also
 help us effortlessly
to
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communicate with other that has long distance or has no physical existence with us directly through video or voice call.
Technology
 allows us to
sending
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send
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 messages, images or
file
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files
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 through certain platform only for
quick
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a quick
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 duration.
For example
, Nowadays, if we have
the
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apply
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distant
relative
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relatives
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 they will contact them through
whatsapp
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WhatsApp
 platforms, sending an image or files quickly and easily.
On the other hand
,
development
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the development
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 of
communication
 that
be
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is
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 affected by
technology
 can
descrease
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decrease
social
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the social
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 ability of
people
. In current time,
people
 prefer like to spend their time for hours
on
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apply
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scrolling
the
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apply
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gadget
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gadgets
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. Because of these, they often ignore the existence
people
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of people
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 or
situation
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situations
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 around them. It
caused
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means
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 they
can not
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need to
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 train their social skills with their surrounding, so
in particular
 opportunities, they have hardship
to communicate
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communicating
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 with
other
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others
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.
For example
, nowadays,
instead
 of attending gatherings event,
people
 prefer like to stay at home and spend their time
by
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apply
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scrolling
the
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their
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gadget
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gadgets
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while
looke
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looking
look
 for the most recent information or
gossips
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gossip
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. In conclusion,
technology
affected
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affects
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 a lot the types of relationships that
people
 make. It brings positive
development
 namely supporting easiness of
communication
 and negative
development
 like lessening social ability.
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