A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.

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to establish a business near

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our environment. Personally,

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believe that the merit of

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up buildings close

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our society will be a lot of the disadvantages rather than advantages.

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totally disagree with someone who may form a building near

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my circle. To start with, one of the most positive

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industrial

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job markets.

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condition can provide stability in our economy and

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.

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that, it enhances the facility and infrastructure in our location. One clear example is when the factory near

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my house was built

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, people

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the

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to make a mini market or tenant around there.

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, with these benefits come certain obstacles.

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the industry will be

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and disturb our living

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air pollution, which is not good for our health.

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it gives an opportunity

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, there is a challenge

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the traffic. It will generate traffic jams, the reason is many people tend to move into

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area so the population

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.

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, workers

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home after work

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everyday

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the terrible thing is when they

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through, it is

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with other workers and

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will appear.

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, it’s true that factory has indeed

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a positive impact

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our life but

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think the negative side is over than the benefit. It

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be better if someone put the business in

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area.