The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1990, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999
The line graph shows how many foreigners
traveled
to the Change the spelling
travelled
UK
and how many local residents went abroad over 11 years. The bar chart compares five different countries
that UK
residents visited in terms of their popularity rates.
Overall
, both the number of visits
to and from the UK
increased between 1979 and 1990; however
, the increase in visits
abroad was more pronounced. Furthermore
, Spain along with
France stood out from their counterparts as the most popular destinations to visit among the UK
travellers
Regarding the line graph, nearly the same number of people traveled
to the Change the spelling
travelled
UK
as those who went overseas in 1979, with approximately 10 million
and 12 million
visits
respectively. In the following years, visits
from the UK
experienced nearly three-fold growth from 20 million
in 1984 to just below 55 million
in 1999, thus
widening the gap between them(comment). Meanwhile, the figure for visits
to the UK
by overseas residents reached about half this
total at about 27 million
.
As for the bar graph, the least visited countries
by citizens of the UK
were Turket
, Greece and the USA, with around 2 Correct your spelling
Turkey
million
, 3 million
and 4 million
visits
made respectively. The other two countries
, however
, showed by
far higher figures Change preposition
apply
of
Change preposition
for
visits
, at nearly 10 million
in Spain and 11 million
in France.
Turkey , Greece and the USA were visited by around 2 million
, 3 million
and 4 million
citizens of the UK
respectively, making them the least popular countries
to visit.
in 1979 the number of people who travelled to and from the UK
was around 10 million
and 12 million
respectively.Submitted by mirfayzqodirov693 on
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