The bar chart below shows the percentage of unemployed graduates aged 20-24, in one European country over a two-year period.

The bar chart illustrates the

proportion

of unemployed

graduate

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male and female between the age of 20 to 24 years, in a particular European nation from 2008 to 2009.

Overall

, it can

be see

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that numbers of

non- working

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graduates increase in

both

gender

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within the given time frame. Meanwhile, the men recorded the highest

proportion

.

To begin

, in January 2008, the

proportion

of unemployed graduate males and females stood at 10 and about 7, respectively.

Moreover

, in the

month

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of April and July,

it's

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figure fell to under 10 in

both

gender

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, which was the lowest number of unemployment for

both

gender

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in 2008.

Furthermore

, the number of male

gender

that was not employed skyrocketed to over 15

while

that of

the

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female was slightly above 10 in the month of October.

In addition

,

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of men between the age range of 20 to 24, who were not employed decreased and stood at almost

same

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figure in January and April 2009 at around 12. Meanwhile, that of women decreased lower than it's opposite

gender

at under 10 in

both

months. The number of unemployed graduates male kept on decreasing but that of the female increased to 10 in July.

Finally

, the rate of unemployment in men peaked

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over 20 in October and it was the highest level of unemployment when compared to the

pervious

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year,

whereas

, the

proportion

of unemployed women rose gradually to under 15 in the same in 2009.