The bar chart below shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for last year. The line shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for the last forty years.

The bar chart below shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for last year. The line shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for the last forty years.
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This
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report describes a bar chart that displays the average
rainfall
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for Australia for each
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last
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year
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on a bimonthly basis. Meanwhile, the line curve illustrates the mean
rainfall
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of Australia on a monthly basis for the past forty
years
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.
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, it is readily apparent that the average
rainfall
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for Australia
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year
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was lower than the average for the past forty
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,
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it generally followed the same pattern. Average
rainfall
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for the
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forty
years
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decreased from a peak at the beginning of the
year
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to lows in the months in the middle of the
year
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. Towards the end of the
year
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,
rainfall
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gradually increased, reaching almost 60
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. For the past 40
years
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, the average total in January started at 80
mm
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and gradually began to drop in February, reaching approximately 35
mm
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in April. August, September, and October were particularly dry, accounting for around 5
mm
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each, both for the
last
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year
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and the
last
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40
years
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. In November and December, both lines representing the average for 40
years
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and the previous
year
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significantly increased, reaching roughly 50
mm
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rainfall, year, years, mm with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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