The bar chart below shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for last year. The line shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for the last forty years.

The bar chart below shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for last year. The line shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for the last forty years.
This
report describes a bar chart that displays the average
rainfall
for Australia for each
last
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year
on a bimonthly basis. Meanwhile, the line curve illustrates the mean
rainfall
of Australia on a monthly basis for the past forty
years
.
Overall
, it is readily apparent that the average
rainfall
for Australia
last
year
was lower than the average for the past forty
years
,
although
it generally followed the same pattern. Average
rainfall
for the
last
forty
years
decreased from a peak at the beginning of the
year
to lows in the months in the middle of the
year
. Towards the end of the
year
,
rainfall
gradually increased, reaching almost 60
millimeters
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. For the past 40
years
, the average total in January started at 80
mm
and gradually began to drop in February, reaching approximately 35
mm
in April. August, September, and October were particularly dry, accounting for around 5
mm
each, both for the
last
year
and the
last
40
years
. In November and December, both lines representing the average for 40
years
and the previous
year
significantly increased, reaching roughly 50
mm
.
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