The bar chart below shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for last year. The line shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for the last forty years.
This
report describes a bar chart that displays the average rainfall
for Australia for each last
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year
on a bimonthly basis. Meanwhile, the line curve illustrates the mean rainfall
of Australia on a monthly basis for the past forty years
.
Overall
, it is readily apparent that the average rainfall
for Australia last
year
was lower than the average for the past forty years
, although
it generally followed the same pattern.
Average rainfall
for the last
forty years
decreased from a peak at the beginning of the year
to lows in the months in the middle of the year
. Towards the end of the year
, rainfall
gradually increased, reaching almost 60 millimeters
.
For the past 40 Change the spelling
millimetres
years
, the average total in January started at 80 mm
and gradually began to drop in February, reaching approximately 35 mm
in April. August, September, and October were particularly dry, accounting for around 5 mm
each, both for the last
year
and the last
40 years
. In November and December, both lines representing the average for 40 years
and the previous year
significantly increased, reaching roughly 50 mm
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