The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007
The line graph highlights data
conserning
the Correct your spelling
concerning
grams
of spreads which were consumed over a twenty-six-year period between 1981 and 2007.
Overall
, it can be seen that there was a negligible upward trend of Low fat and reduced spreads while
the dispensing of Margarine and Butter declined strikingly over the period in question. Another interesting point is that the Butter was the most popular in 1981. However
, until 1996 there was not
distributedCorrect your spelling
no
Low fat
and reduced spreads.
Looking at the details, as regards Butter, after growing slightly just under 160 Correct your spelling
Low-fat
grams
it was
reached a peak. At Unnecessary verb
apply
this
point, there was a striking slump to 50 grams
in 2007. If we look at Margarine having slightly dropped from 90 grams
in 1986 and then
there was a peak time in
100 Change preposition
of
grams
from 1991 to 1996 after which was worsen
dramatically.
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worsened
By contrast
, with regarding
to Low fat and reduced spreads, not having seen until 1996, the production surged rapidly to just over 80 Replace the word
regard
grams
, after which point it was a dip marginally to 70 grams
in 2007.Submitted by eshonqulovamadina32 on
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