The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph demonstrates the
number
of worldwide sales
in billions of dollars
of several types of digital games
in the period 2000 to 2006. Overall
, mobile phone games
, online games
, and handheld games
indicated an upward trend, while
handheld games
demonstrated a downward trend.
With regards to the sales
of mobile phone games
, it is noticeable that there weren’t any online or mobile games
until 2002. In 2002, the number
of sales
was under 1 billion
dollars
, however
, the rate considerably increased to reach around 3 billion
dollars
in 2003. After the year, it was increasingly sold ending with a number
of sales
of over 6 billion
dollars
in 2006.
The number
of sales
of online games
started to appear in 2001 for less than 1 billion
dollars
, and it continuously rose from approximately 1 billion
dollars
to almost 9 billion
dollars
between 2002 and 2005, ending with the highest number
of sales
for around 9 billion
dollars
in 2006. Moreover
, there was a steady increase in the sales
of handheld games
from around 12 to almost 18 billion
dollars
between 2000 and 2006.
However
, the number
of the sales
of handheld games
was in the decrease from nearly 12 to under 3 billion
dollars
over the 7-year period.Submitted by kanittha.sma on
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