The maps below shows an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site

The maps below shows an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site
The maps below illustrate Norbinton’s current industrial zone and its planned development in the future.
Overall
, it can be seen that the
town
is planning to turn into a suburban area with many facilities.
In addition
,
according to
the plan, all the factories are going to be removed, making way for new housing and buildings
At the end
of the
road
to the east
side
, the new school will be constructed, replacing the factory that was there.
Moreover
, the new alley to the north
side
is going to be erected on
this
road
, making way for a newly established playground. Looking to the central
side
of the
town
, new shops, and a medical
center
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will be built
to
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the west-south and south-eastern
side
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of the central zone. Heading to the western
side
of the
town
, a new
road
is planned to be established, making way for the industrial area.
In addition
, the
road
will be constructed to the north
side
of the
town
, connecting a river with the central
side
and having a housing zone along it.
Moreover
, the new breach is planned to be manufactured
at the end
of the
road
joining
a
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farmland and the newly built housings on the other
side
of the river with the main part of the
town
.
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