The maps below shows an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site
The maps below illustrate Norbinton’s current industrial zone and its planned development in the future.
Overall
, it can be seen that the Linking Words
town
is planning to turn into a suburban area with many facilities. Use synonyms
In addition
, Linking Words
according to
the plan, all the factories are going to be removed, making way for new housing and buildings
Linking Words
At the end
of the Linking Words
road
to the east Use synonyms
side
, the new school will be constructed, replacing the factory that was there. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the new alley to the north Linking Words
side
is going to be erected on Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
road
, making way for a newly established playground. Looking to the central Use synonyms
side
of the Use synonyms
town
, new shops, and a medical Use synonyms
center
will be built Change the spelling
centre
to
the west-south and south-eastern Change preposition
on
Use synonyms
side
of the central zone.
Heading to the western Fix the agreement mistake
sides
side
of the Use synonyms
town
, a new Use synonyms
road
is planned to be established, making way for the industrial area. Use synonyms
In addition
, the Linking Words
road
will be constructed to the north Use synonyms
side
of the Use synonyms
town
, connecting a river with the central Use synonyms
side
and having a housing zone along it. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the new breach is planned to be manufactured Linking Words
at the end
of the Linking Words
road
joining Use synonyms
a
farmland and the newly built housings on the other Remove the article
apply
side
of the river with the main part of the Use synonyms
town
.Use synonyms
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