The maps below shows an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site
The maps below illustrate Norbinton’s current industrial zone and its planned development in the future.
Overall
, it can be seen that the town
is planning to turn into a suburban area with many facilities. In addition
, according to
the plan, all the factories are going to be removed, making way for new housing and buildings
At the end
of the road
to the east side
, the new school will be constructed, replacing the factory that was there. Moreover
, the new alley to the north side
is going to be erected on this
road
, making way for a newly established playground. Looking to the central side
of the town
, new shops, and a medical center
will be built Change the spelling
centre
to
the west-south and south-eastern Change preposition
on
side
of the central zone.
Heading to the western Fix the agreement mistake
sides
side
of the town
, a new road
is planned to be established, making way for the industrial area. In addition
, the road
will be constructed to the north side
of the town
, connecting a river with the central side
and having a housing zone along it. Moreover
, the new breach is planned to be manufactured at the end
of the road
joining a
farmland and the newly built housings on the other Remove the article
apply
side
of the river with the main part of the town
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