The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps depict a factory zone in Norbiton's town and
designed
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design
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future growth of the area.
Firstly
, it can be clearly seen, that the river will divide
to
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into
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two parts from the middle and the farmland will convert from the north to the northeast of the manufacturing site.
Secondly
, all the factories are going to
demolish
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and a house or other accommodations are going to
construct
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be constructed
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around the circle roads and near the school. As the maps illustrate, shops will replaced by the factory,
whereas
a medical centre is planned to
build
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in the south of the plot.
Moreover
, a playground is going to
add
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be added
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next to the river and near the school,
while
a school will
erect
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be erected
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in the east of the evolution section.
Besides
, the largest house will build
place
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a place
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of the farmland in the north of
quarter
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the quarter
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.
Overall
, it can be observed, that the manufacturing quarter will be developed
much
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apply
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to become more bustling for the
population
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population's
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convenience in future.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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