The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps depict a factory zone in Norbiton's town and
designed
future growth of the area.
Wrong verb form
design
Firstly
, it can be clearly seen, that the river will divide Linking Words
to
two parts from the middle and the farmland will convert from the north to the northeast of the manufacturing site. Change preposition
into
Secondly
, all the factories are going to Linking Words
demolish
and a house or other accommodations are going to Wrong verb form
be demolished
construct
around the circle roads and near the school.
As the maps illustrate, shops will replaced by the factory, Wrong verb form
be constructed
whereas
a medical centre is planned to Linking Words
build
in the south of the plot. Wrong verb form
be built
Moreover
, a playground is going to Linking Words
add
next to the river and near the school, Wrong verb form
be added
while
a school will Linking Words
erect
in the east of the evolution section.
Wrong verb form
be erected
Besides
, the largest house will build Linking Words
place
of the farmland in the north of Add an article
a place
quarter
.
Correct article usage
the quarter
Overall
, it can be observed, that the manufacturing quarter will be developed Linking Words
much
to become more bustling for the Correct quantifier usage
apply
population
convenience in future.Change noun form
population's
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